Wednesday, 9 March 2016

We are learning to write to describe

Here is today's writing - we wrote to describe our Mum or Dad

My mum looks beautiful. - Ashlee

 Mum smells nice.  Blue eyes and white skin. - Ashton

 My Dad is big and strong and has spiky hair and is cool.  - Austin

 My Dad us big and good and heavy.  He is looks like strong and he eats chips and sleeps in the warm, warm bed.  - Carter

 My Dad is cool his T-Shirt feels soft.  - Codi

 My Dad is strong and he has muscles and he is cool.  He looks really cool.  - Cooper G

 My Dad's strong.  I like Mum and Dad.  - Daryl

 My Dad is big and cool and strong and tall and prickly.  - Dominic

 My mum is sweet and her hair is brown and she is lovely and I love her and she is 32.  - Jack B

 My Dad is strong.  He is heavy.  He is 39.  He has hazel eyes.  - Jack C

 My Dad is big master.  He has brown hair.  - Kael

 My dad is big and strong.  He is spiky.  - Kahui

 Mum is beautiful.  Mum is fast.  Mum is kind.  - Kayla

 My Dad is strong.  - Nathaniel

I love my mum and she smells like strawberries.  She looks like me.  - Reese

My Dad is cool and his T-Shirt has a gorilla on it.  - Samuel


 My Dad trains Zac and I help him feed Zac and I help him throw Zac's ball.  - Scarlett

My Dad is big.  My Dad is strong.  My Dad feels soft.  - Tamati

My Dad is big.  My Dad is strong.  My Dad has spiky hair.  Cool.  - Zavier.
 I miss my mum when I go to school and she has dark hair.  - Cooper P

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